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Summer In Carolinas

When I hear the tweets of songbirds at dawn
Nesting in the oak tree outside my door
I smile at the sun shining on my face

A red bird scours the brown grass for food
Blue birds skeeter on tree branches above
Squirrels run up treetops scampering nearby

There is more fun in spring than wintertime
Tree frogs sing songs of joy at night
Fireflies lit the darkness as they mate

When I hear spring back, summer is here
Hot beaches call my name to the ocean
Hot sand between my toes makes me holler

As I run for the shore's cool water
I dance my jig retreating from high waves
That reached my tighs quickly pulling me in

When I hear the tweets of songbirds at dawn
I warmly smile at yesteryear memories
Hoping for another day of fun times

By Barbara Washington 3/9/2012 ©

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LOL a couple of minor errors but all in all yes spring is alive with sights and sounds. The little(peepers) tree frogs at night , the owls and all of the different mating calls of the birs

The Carolina's are beautiful in spring time. Time for garden planting , weeding , seeding and of course the dreaded allergies
you have captured it very nicely
Chrys

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I think you pretty much nailed a spring day here in Carolina. You need to check a few misspells though.......
listen to the peepers sing
announcing the coming spring....................stan

Enjoyed your welcoming comment and suggestions

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