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A Star Forged

It was with the sarcastic gusto

Of her first words to him

That she became her own invitation

To the end of his contact list.

There she resided shining

Like a new born star

Amongst the ashes

Of burned out relationships.

The flotsam of friendships

Both false and forlorn

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First impressions matter, for good and bad. They are fine when you like someone on first meeting...

Thought brilliantly crafted from insight, Excellent!!!
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