Profound. Certainly a conversational tone could be sensed and stimulating the thought process....

Regards,

A lovely piece of writing, questioning the things we cannot see.
We are physical beings, so as we are, we cannot see, as we look with our eyes.
I hear the Children laughing, at least they know something we have yet to uncover.
You seem to be aware, then doubt where your physical boundaries hold you.
I worry not of many things, just talking, it is a way of belonging to a beautiful place.
But many want to stay as they are, but this is the way it has always been.
I am going to my cave for a week from tomorrow, to have some think time.
It will be so quiet there, but it will be fun and a rest,
You take care, will talk next week sometime, but I shall be there also,
Yours, Ian xx

This soliloquy
Speaks of loneliness
and despair
when nights falls
when one is all alone
even the bathroom walls
are cold and silent
we console ourselves
someone upstairs will help us
through the night
as day comes again
ere
to say this much
Loved does dare
no waffle here
if you care
to share
okay
compare

If you read my comment, I just said good conversational tone..not between whom? :)

this is an awesome imaginative dialogue. I admit I make use from your comment to raj but,even without that comment, it can be easily figured.

I think such a dialogue can make benefit from the advanced formatting, as you can use italics for one and non-italics for the other or so, then you won't even need to mention in the title that it is a conversation.
Enjoyable and creative.
Thanks for sharing.

that this might be a bit more effective if written in another physical poem.Then I got done thinking and started remembering a form I thought up once. "Parallel". Putting a conversation in parallel leave no doubt who said what. See "Inheritor and Benefactor". A hard form to post but pretty effective. Or being a comp whiz such as you are you could put one twin in italics. Very interesting poem, ma'm.........stan

very satisfying. I agree with Rula that a "separation" of voices would benefit the poem.
Otherwise, a extremely successful work.

I approve.

Wonderfully composed as are all of your poems=-- yes, I read everything.

I wrote APPWARANCES on same theme. When we pass something happens bui the closer we get the less we believe in the hereafter. The poetry we have in us, however, says something about a ""soul"", yet having been raised an Italian Roman Catholic, many beliefs have been drilled into me that have become indelible sources of anxiety, I keep to my faith in Christ, but, then, I am filled with doubt. Paradox.

I saw my mother pass from the same disease that I inherited, It was horrible. Crisis of faith--why do we suffer the agony of ending? Death's silence speaks to the argument that there is nothing beyond this life and to ;lose someone you love is the worst pain imaginable.

Beautiful and sensitive poetry you write, Judyanne.

JOE