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Sitzmarks

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Fri, 2016-01-22 07:03

Senyru

Kids played in the snow
Massive snow ball fight erupted
They all made sitzmarks.

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Editing - rough draft

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Fri, 2016-01-22 14:16

Esker's picture

Great!

was just outside having a smoke
beautiful out..just the right temperature
thinking of snowball fights as a kid
or the old hockey net patched together!

thank U

sitzmarks!

Fri, 2016-01-22 20:31

Barbara Writes's picture

Thanks for reading.

With this monster storm snow blizzard coming it seem a fitting poem

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Sat, 2016-01-23 15:08

Rula's picture

A cute

little poem Barbara..

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Tue, 2016-01-26 13:44

Barbara Writes's picture

Thanks

Glad you like it

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