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Sharing Love (A Hentai)

Submitted by alidzain on Tue, 2016-01-26 11:17

The giving of alms
is the sharing of one's love
that blooms from kindness.

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Structured: Eastern
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Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Tue, 2016-01-26 13:47

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A cute little poem.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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alidzain

Tue, 2016-01-26 14:07

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Thks for the visit, the read and the comment.

Alid

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