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Seductive Nights

I first scoped your ass
the glare of a gaze
moving up your chest
so clear, my thoughts could touch your breasts.

My heart pulsated
as with rhythmic muse
like a moonlight sonata
within shades of midnight blue.

The appeal of your pose
enticing, like fire-red diamonds
you burn soul
giving me strange desires.

Your lust, naked pipedreams
henna in your hair
touched by falling sunbeams
how it flared.

I stared, resistless
like a moth burned by light
your hips paralyzed me
at first sight.

I'm caught in a haze
your beauty with complexity
got me caressing you, finessing you
out of your satin white panties.

Your naval exposed in this place
and from the heat you perspire
sultry, exotic taste
as I take you ever higher.

Sexy in your own right
gorgeous from head to toe
beautiful, you're so fine
I think you should know-

you move me like strong weed
floating, intoxicating, choking
off the pearl of your seas
the dynamics, motion, dreams.

Your lips taste like honey
tantalizing my mind
and your walk is all to me something
when you come by.

Silver moons at your feet
as I penetrate your garden
my potency, you reek
the scent of aromatic blossoms.

Digging deep between your thighs
making lava flow
seismic reactions
until your soul rises.

I can bring you to climax
in this love sex, sweet, wet
erotic positions
and kisses on your neck.

Let me explore your mind
the distance to the size
until fluid flows down your legs
like the Niagara Falls.

I'll make you weak
your body hot
like saffron...take flight
as I lick your thighs tonight.

Your breasts turgid
like grapes from the vine
call me dream lover
lady of mine.

She walks in shades of night
her footsteps in the shadows
dreamless, seductive eyes
with a miniscule of innocence.

In the nude
me and you
foreplay on your clitoris
as sexual movements come in rhythms.

Do you feel me
I can see us clearly
me bouncing your pretty ass
in the moonlight.

Deep poetic strokes
the sweetest words I ever wrote
across your soul
still wanting you more.

This passion is strong
in and out till dawn
all around till you cum
call my name thereof.

You're fine, no lie
your form inviting
I can't stop writing
these seductive lines.

Your fingers outline my chest
the touch of my virility
your submission demands
with each caress.

Your beauty is like Nefertiti
remember these seductive nights
as we play in quiet storms
in this sweet sex love.

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this is a fantastic poem. But, I do not see what is has to do with the Bully. am I missing something here?

*hugs, Cat

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I did not see where I submitted my poem to any contest.

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It was submitted. look under contests

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I enjoyed the theme of this. It is the sort of work I like to produce best myself. I could be critical but I am not going to be. I assume you put it in the contest in error but I am quite sure something will come up to suit this kind of poem. Alex.

Thank you, and yes it was an error on my part.

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