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Rainbows with Golden Lining

Rainbows with Golden Lining

You dwell in imagery
I, in an isolated museum
You come to whisk me away
You’ll find me behind
A newer
Golden creation

Like some smashing rainbow,
I will appear in the sky,
Some one will then say
Twas Loved.

Some day
They’ll question how and why,
I’d find my way
Striking gold to become
Shakingspeare!
Ah!
But not shaky
But to all humanity
Having become so lively

Then that rainbow
Shall come forth
From the crowd
To make a golden ring
Like an unimaginable
Rainbow out of you
With a diamond hue
Twill be a piece of art
In the annals of time
How a poet
Became a permanent rainbow
Indomitable one
Who couldn’t once at all rhyme!

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before I came to Neopoet I thought all poetry that didn't rhyme wasn't really poetry. Thanks to you and others I have seen the error of my ways. Have a good Thanksgiving loved.................scribbler

I never needed
to rhyme

u know well

but still
i am not yet

in a well

OR PERHAPS SOON WILL BE.

U, Stan and Shirley

r my 2

loving....... forceful.... and magnificent ....ENCOURAGING ..
HANDS

permanent frnds

others perhaps
maNy MORE MAY join in

to see

the rainbow in me

as u both

now do see

EVER SO
LOVEDLY

loved

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u and stan

r my 2
HANDS

permanent frnds

others perhaps
maNy MORE MAY join in

to see

the rainbow in me

as u both

now do see

loved

author comment

each on a rainbow
wonderful and fine
poems and poets
are each as
individual
as each person
is their own in this world

some poems rhyme
some poems don't
but all share a gift
of rhythmic current

in language the author's
heart unfurls in the wind

__________________________________________________
'write on! let these words free.'

gracious thanks

to thee friend

u do

humble me

loved

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it is now snowing here

do read the

rainbow one

have some fun
for then when it does snow
the rainbow
IN ME
shall go!

loved

author comment
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