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The Murder in Sixth Street Alley…continued

We lock eyes for a momentary eternity
I am inexplicably swallowed
Falling into bottomless voids
Blinding black madness with no remorse
Waves a disapproving finger
Like a mother implementing discipline
Adrenaline!
A great tidal wave surges over me
My terror filled eyes disengage lunacy
Incidental voyeur now turned quarry
I have but one option remaining
Run!

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I knew you folks would make me write about killing. Lol. It’s good practice. Psychopathy and mass murder is foreign. As a romantic poet though, I’d kill for love. I’d die for love.
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Comments

it is brilliant...you took over without a stutter or a misstep! my heart was in my throat as I read this installment of our round robin! you don' disappoint!!!
*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy

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You fell right into step. Always a fantastic write! My turn next...

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Now that's some opportunity lol
Good job Geez and Tim. Looking forward to the Rose continuation.
Mark

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