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The Murder in Sixth Street Alley…continued
We lock eyes for a momentary eternity
I am inexplicably swallowed
Falling into bottomless voids
Blinding black madness with no remorse
Waves a disapproving finger
Like a mother implementing discipline
Adrenaline!
A great tidal wave surges over me
My terror filled eyes disengage lunacy
Incidental voyeur now turned quarry
I have but one option remaining
Run!
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
I knew you folks would make me write about killing. Lol. It’s good practice. Psychopathy and mass murder is foreign. As a romantic poet though, I’d kill for love. I’d die for love.
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Mon, 2022-07-25 16:10
LOL, Tim (on your last few words)
it is brilliant...you took over without a stutter or a misstep! my heart was in my throat as I read this installment of our round robin! you don' disappoint!!!
*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy
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RoseBlack
Mon, 2022-07-25 16:52
Well done
You fell right into step. Always a fantastic write! My turn next...
~RoseBlack~