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Morning

Submitted by IRiz on Mon, 2018-03-05 16:47

sleepy
blue heron
on Green Lake

feathers
trembling stems
dull winter wind

clearing
their throats
crows bark like dogs

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Workshop: 
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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Rula

Tue, 2018-03-06 02:34

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another piece with great imagery and not without some humor. The last few lines make me smile.
Thank you for sharing.

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raj

Tue, 2018-03-06 04:26

I echo Rula's comment.. "cows barking like dogs".had me laughing ...this Sunku tells me that you are having lots of fun....keep it going IRiz...
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