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memories now have become memoirs ....recalled ///upgraded
memories are the imprints
everlasting ones
on the footprints,
maybe finger prints
of time,
but all evade us
even does time.
but memories take
much longer
these after all
none can ever erase,
it’s an inevitable phase
today
becomes a yesterday
and
with a coming tomorrow
we hope to play
as if it's a today
then memories,
many more
will form...
friend how then these
can be willed away
could anyone that ever,
say
all memories have become
memoirs from today
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
loved
Fri, 2010-12-31 10:57
The moment I saw a tick
I knew
Shirley
the good wishes
must be from uuUUUUUUUUUUUUU
and once again
a HAPPY nyr 2011 TO UUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
loved
loved
Fri, 2010-12-31 12:15
I HAVE WELL WISHERS LIKE YOU
So I need'nt worry
whether we are travelling
in parallels
as long as we r
travelling together
onwards
forewards
and
still in
parrallels
loved
loved
Fri, 2010-12-31 13:27
I like it
when u like it
for such poems
emanate from my dumb mind
but just once
you r fab
so u can see
many don't
many can't
MANY MORE WONT see
and many more
are at SEA
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO THEE.
loved
raj
Fri, 2010-12-31 13:39
Very true..
memories are milestones
in the stream of life
some upstream
some downstream
some made at the cross roads
others at the parting
some at the confluence
where heart n souls meet
Happy New Year 2011...
raj (sublime_ocean)
loved
Fri, 2010-12-31 13:47
I knew Raj
HELLO RAJ, I KNEW
You would come by
As yesterday
I’d asked you
WHAT'S IN YOUR NAME
You like I
Are an individual,
An exceptional soul
And
May I wish a prayer for thee
In 2011 may you reach?
The heights of happiness
As I will
Having known
My friend ye
loved
raj
Fri, 2010-12-31 14:22
Dear Loved...
thank you for your lovely wishes...i wish the same for you too...
with much love...
raj (sublime_ocean)
loved
Fri, 2010-12-31 15:17
thanks a gr888888888deal
much regards and good wishes to uuuuuuuuuuu
loved
crypticbard
Sat, 2011-01-08 07:51
Without memoirs
Without memoirs the memories fade faster.
__________________________________________________
'write on! let these words free.'
loved
Sat, 2011-01-08 20:23
You said it
What's left now for me to add ,
I'm glad you are ahead of time
and some day memories
you will commit to time.
loved
scribbler
Sat, 2011-01-08 08:08
memories
and what are we but memories. Take them away and nothing's left.....................scribbler
loved
Sat, 2011-01-08 20:24
Your SCRIBBLES
Sir are idellible
so of you I have no fear
you are infallible
loved
weirdelf
Sun, 2011-08-28 00:25
Your poetry has improved so much lately!
What is your secret! It is no secret that I have previously disliked your work.
What are you doing differently? Editing? Listening? Using real english with grammar and coherent lines?
Whatever, I appreciate it.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Thu, 2012-08-30 14:39
gracious
G R A C I A
Jess
loved
loved
Sun, 2011-08-28 10:02
thanks
ur guidance
shows the path
loved