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Lover boys
Across the Internet …I daily come across ….many guys in search of love…. expressing their desires in the lurch ….hoping someone will read them …and find a lovely girl …one of your choosing …for them…. they wonder aimlessly …some in stark nudity… others a bit too shy …. they call themselves a guy ….I wonder why…..
If you can’t get a girl down your …home and town and living lane …or college, school …. to be simple and plain …someone you can see and follow and know face to face…how you would find one out here ….writing poetry only …
It wonders me … yes as to why you are wandering …in the surfs of paradise ….when decision of a desired Valentine in your minds ….you do hide. ….I had the Valentine of my years since eons past … go guys lover boys …. find one for yourself a gal …you love and fast...ere the snowfalls and you too experience a fall…
Comments
alidzain
Mon, 2014-02-17 03:16
err...
what do you call the style of this writing?
Alid
loved
Mon, 2014-02-17 08:06
free freer style
as all poetry is
emotion in full motion
creation and creativity
of modern genes
hope you know about
the selfish one
indestructible
but the point here is did u like it
Hopefully u did
loved
alidzain
Mon, 2014-02-17 13:30
not bad
its just that i'm not familiar with so many of the"..........." throughout the poem. LOL
Alid
loved
Mon, 2014-02-17 20:37
yeah
LOL LOL LOL LOL
O ALL
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