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longest ever

well ya'll/you’ll be enticed

what ever you may say
i shall entice you one day
the charm of a woman
none can resist
no matter how much
one does persist.

I will entice you one day,
if it is not today,
at least
some other day

with all the experience
behind my years
i know by now
only a girl can do
without any fear,
no matter what her intentions be
her lover that can never see

how i will entice
you’ll never know,
for every guy has a price
he goes running like mad
when he has laid his mind,
but her enticing ways
one can never find.

only a woman carries that charm,
she is lightening,
he is sound,
the cloud does burst,
there is a sound,
but heard much later,
as lightening flashes,
that much faster

I’m that lightening,
who will take you?
in the vehicle of time
beyond space
where there will be left of you,
no solid trace.
in the far folds of time,
you will be forgotten,
like the boy king
Tutankhamen.

when your near and loved ones try,
to hold you back,
you will know
they shall have to slack,
as in the eternity of time,
you shall be buried,
be you single
or married

challenge me not,
as I shall not at all lose,
between your spouse and me,
one,
you’ll have to choose.

I am that fire,
that can quench your thirst,
also will consume you rightly first.
you’re self,
soul and what have you,
if anything at all,
your whole body
this superficial garb you wear,
oh man, nay woman,
do not ever me at all dare.

for no one can prevent
a promiscuous woman
from igniting herself
in the cauldron,
save god,
none else can really help.

do not challenge me,
do not fall prey
i am the personification of
the whole source of creation
under my personal command,
you
man or woman,
will always stay
as I alone
am the sun

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Well that took a while to read and the only problem was to keep track of the story, I know there were reminders all through but quite a difficult read. But again for someone to write to such lengths is a task indeed and I think you carried it out very well, now we have to figure out if you are that woman lol, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

friend Judy once said
even I could and did compose longish ones
this was just to fill in a gap
that's all
woman what?/

loved

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