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less is more
It got me thinking
simplify
make more out of less
like a good omelet
eggs, bacon, cheese
thats all
I bought a cheesecake
the other day
and I have eaten
most of it
plain
no fruit compote
or sauce at all
it's delicious
then there's
my favorite sport
hockey
a simple game
offensive plan
put the puck in their net
defenseive plan
keep the puck out
of our net
alot of the best games
are 3 to 2, or 1-0
closeout the opponent
thats the best win
I could go on and on
but less is more
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Comments
scribbler
Mon, 2010-12-06 16:17
less is more
It is obvious that a prior comment of mine ( meant as a compliment ) has offended you. this was not my intent..............scribbler
Edevold
Mon, 2010-12-06 20:36
Not at all - not at all...!
Dear Scribbler, it just got me to thinking........ I appreciate your comments very much, Thanks - I'm just trying to get back to 50% more or less after a bad fall, a bad concussion, and the post concussive syndrome that seems to go on and on......... I wish I could come up with some better writing - my neuropsych doc recomended that I write, so .......
Thanks, Mark
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