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Knots
I know aloneness
When it holds you.
Little pieces
Of the gypsy music,
Tributes
To the end of the world.
Unputdownable:
You are a bird now.
-Pre operation.
Dissolving in a sweet mirage
Of distant deserts
All the pain in the world can’t help you
In these Safe houses Of
Color shocks
In your mind it is mid July
Of Indoor sunshine
Bless the mother that bore you
With the sane anguish that it takes
To wake each time.
To be each time.
And now on sunny days
We sit beneath the cherry blossom trees.
Ever thankful.
Today we were just made.
These could be the best days.
Find yourself;
Choose to be.
Hope wears no knots.
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Comments
MrsEmarie
Mon, 2020-04-20 09:06
tiny acquirements
I've seen a lifetime in these lines. I feel I know the truth of these words and what they represent but also there is more here. A universal knowledge of love, exception, being. This is stunning. Thank you for sharing!
- Emarie ~ theladyblue
c lynn brooks
Tue, 2020-04-21 09:19
alicat
welcome to neo poet I am sure you will like it here
read your profile and yes this poem is abstract
let me say your title draws the reader in
your first line grabs and holds the reader. both signs of good writing
Chrys
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