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Kay Of Ohio

You are not a single Z
but the essence
of originality and creativity,
as in these few words ,
you exhibit the cause of our very being

...''...the marrow and the circumstance
when all is clear in that moment
of oblivion.....what essence of ecstasy

I remember three gals,
teens discussing what it was,
the human male penis .

The first one who went in
and touched it said
see I told you it was flesh,
the second bragged,
no tis meat
and
the final gal said
how wrong you both are
tis bone,
the marrow was coming out...

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Comments

You are one brave poet.

The difference in your poetry lately is that you express real ideas, not simple simplistic assonance without real meaning.

What has changed? Do you really want to be understood?

I see a growth of courage.

cheers,
Jess
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