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Is justice served?
What separates a human from a beast
both have instinct
one tells lies
other doesn't know what lie is
and is sacrificed
world watches in disbelief
at the injustice
realizing it's politics
where the beast is sworn as Justice
believe it or not, that Just is
reminding me of George Orwell
"some are more equal than others"
in the Animal Kingdom
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Sparrow
Wed, 2019-04-10 19:16
raj
This one needs a body, it has come over as a little loose, maybe the continuity is a little off..
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