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Just You

Submitted by raj on Mon, 2018-09-17 14:30

If I've to remember
just two,
one of them
would be you

if fewer,
it would be
just you

if nothing,
then there isn't
anything
worth remembering

It's You
who makes Me
whole

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Shadowdancer3349

Mon, 2018-09-17 14:57

Simply stated but effective

raj

Mon, 2018-09-17 15:11

for reading and your approving comment..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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Rula

Tue, 2018-09-18 15:56

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this one raj. It's simple but not without sincere sentiments. I thought it's clever too!
Nothing to suggest but much appreciation!

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raj

Wed, 2018-09-19 04:45

Hi friend Rula...thanks for your approving comment..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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gregwa8

Thu, 2018-09-20 21:52

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nice. powerful in its simplicity.

raj

Fri, 2018-09-21 06:43

thanks Greg ...good to know you liked its simplicity...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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