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Jeez! Not Another Love Poem!
It was my silliness, I thought.
Or maybe it was just the smile.
Turns out it was our laughter.
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Last few words:
That's it - LOL!
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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San Francisco Bay Area - USA
Favorite Poets
Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)
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Candlewitch
Sat, 2024-02-10 17:11
hello,
Yes, That will do it....
*hugs, Cat
*
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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Unca Fez
Sat, 2024-02-10 18:02
What Attracted Us...
What attracted us (Cat and myself) to each other was our outlandish sense of humor. It is amazing how a shared laugh can bring two people together. Well done!
Thanx,
Steve