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Feel my butterfly..
Feel my butterfly
Blind fold me love
let my hair flow
and upon my face
bring about a glow
see me as you wish
where-ever
let me feel your fingers quiver all over
sending sweet electric shocks
Down my spine..
hold me around my waist
let me feel you hard
upon as times advance
hold me tight
let me feel a comfort slight
as when buds sprouts all about
my life would be bliss without a doubt
just hold me again
and let me bear
the pain of love
and enjoy a newer love of joy…
just hold me again
let me like a butterfly fly
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Esker
Sat, 2013-12-07 21:17
passionate and sense riven
i know you must read the romantics of the early to late century long past
before cellphone and dvds
we are sense driven
not senseless
our passions given...
we feel we emote
and desire for some
is and will be an exotic must
i had many friends who were
immersed in love/lust/passion
intoxicating dark/light
free/bound
reviled estatic
synapse junction
thank you for sharing
what makes you feel
loved!
\mr \esker
loved
Sat, 2013-12-07 22:21
your inputs are
more passionate
than my ecstatic expressions...
hope these serve
a normal guy's
desired extensions
loved
author commentIan.T
Sun, 2013-12-08 04:03
Loved
You have another read of this piece, it is lovely but a small flow point was there or a tiny point where it wandered.
Great to see that our Steve has come in to enhance your words with his thoughts.
Take care young Bard I knew it would be worth the wait to see that poet arise and shake off the dust of yesteryear, as I climb onto the stage for the seventh age, I shall smile that I have seen these last few works of yours.
NOW KEEP IT UP!!!!
Yours as always Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sun, 2013-12-08 17:41
you Ian are that flag staff
that shall never fly half mast
and as you smile for me
I shall for ever be happy
The bard in his prime of youth
made a final debut
only because of Jess and you
both deserve a big hug and thank you
Jess will accept it
some day too
loved
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