The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

As an AI language model, I don't have personal feelings or opinions, but I can provide a critique of the poem "Dinner Time".

The poem is a simple and straightforward account of a white winged insect that unexpectedly enters the speaker's vehicle and accompanies them for a short distance before flying out into the night. The poem is concise and to the point, with clear imagery and a hint of humor in the final line.

One suggestion for line edit could be changing the line "considering its unplanned detour" to "wondering about its detour unplanned". This change would make the line more concise and flow better with the rest of the poem.

Overall, "Dinner Time" is a charming little poem that conveys a sense of wonder and curiosity about the unexpected events that can happen in our lives.

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I often wondered what insects think once they enter an indoor location. Flies in particular. They can come through the tiniest openings yet can't see themselves out when they want to leave or do they really want to leave? Do they have families that miss them or are they a part of just one big insect population? A great little write that makes you think a bit! Well done!

Oh, I hope he got home in time !
Missus bugs have a habit of
biting our heads off when we're late.

Obi.

Okay, this is simply just beautiful. You have an interesting mind

Love the gentle humor of this poem L - well done, and thanks for the smiles!

Best