It's got energy...and a definite point of view.

I wonder what this other, more enlightened world would look like from you eyes.

some day, tell us that part of the story too. (if you please)

these last couple of pieces of yours seem to have something a little different about them.
I like this difference, even though I can't define it

I enjoyed the read

right up to the last two stanzas

then it turns from a rant (and a really good one that makes people pick up and agree) to a plea.. which (imo only of course) tames it down somewhat... and i, at least, am left with an old ‘yea-yea, old hat’ feeling...

i feel the poem would be so much more powerful if you stopped at ‘propagating the absurd.’
and then finished with ‘remember our silence gave them licence.’

just in my opinion, i think to be left thinking there, rather than be led to the ‘let’s fix it’ thought, is more effective

love the write, great word usage and rhythm, as per your usual

love judy
xxx