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Blissful
watching ducks paddling, swans necking, is bliss and ripples make lilies bloom
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Free verse
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lovedly
Tue, 2018-07-31 14:53
raj
you are very creative
another lady started her kind of poetry Rani Parri if I remember correctly
same word ending as in rhyming
eg
land sand band etc
POETRY is an expression of emotion to its hilt with milk least overspilt
great poetry raj congrats
raj
Tue, 2018-07-31 14:57
thanks Lovedly
for the read....you must be a very well read person....excuse my lack of knowledge about Rani Parri you mention.
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentlovedly
Tue, 2018-07-31 15:01
and dear Raj_sublime
I have been composing poetry since age 7
and now I stand at the verge of heaven
still a slight far away horizon ....maybe
and
on the Internet and many sites I have been since last 14 years so may be my exposure speaks about rani paari I had posted a poetry
let me sink into it for thee
raj you are a extraordinarily wonderful poet
may you be equated with
RUDYARD KIPLING of India
Rula
Tue, 2018-07-31 16:54
Wow
A big one…! ^_^
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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raj
Wed, 2018-08-01 06:48
Thanks Purple
for reading and good to know my effort inspired your imagination. Recently I have started challenging myself to write one line poems and could do a few so far. More are in the making :)
be well and keep writing..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
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