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If I could wrap my head around these things, I'd be a fly in a spider web
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Rula
Mon, 2015-05-04 16:22
Hello Anna
Nice to see you posting here again. It makes my heart good to see the older friends.
I thought there is a good thought and a subtext here, but also thought it would have been better if you gave a shorter title and extended your thought a little bit more to give us, the readers a space to enjoy. Anyway I know you when you revolutionize even over yourself.
best regards to you.
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weirdelf
Tue, 2015-05-05 05:35
You are a fly in the spider's web of your own causes
I've lost count.
They are all good causes though.
cheers,
Jess
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Kailashana2
Tue, 2015-05-05 05:58
Hi Rula, sometimes I turn
Hi Rula, sometimes I turn inside out, and my poems are askance.
Hi Jess. A woman's work is never done. lol.
weirdelf
Tue, 2015-05-05 06:08
True
Lysistrata was wrong. Lots of sex stops war.
cheers,
Jess
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'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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emeka ozurumba
Tue, 2015-05-05 07:55
how?
baby fighters along the way,
weirdelf
Tue, 2015-05-05 09:17
wrong! Murderer!
Babies live to continue the evolutionary line.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Esker
Tue, 2015-05-05 23:15
Always the artist...
Bravo my Dear!!!!!!!
bravo..
(mr Wolf)
Seren
Thu, 2015-05-07 12:31
the essence of you right
the essence of you right there in that one sentence
love xox
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
raj
Thu, 2015-05-07 14:10
Hi Anna
would be nice if after a while you let us know the essence of this write by decoding the abstract...till then you have me guessing...
raj (sublime_ocean)