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Racism
Reign of hatred spreading discrimination
Anger, uncontrolled is a blind beast unleashed
Cold is the heart which does not know the value of love
In the soul, corruption is a disease
Sum it all up from the top and see what you get....
Madness lingering in the minds of mortals
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Free verse
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Comments
Ian.T
Mon, 2014-03-10 19:25
Alid
An excellent Acrostic I wonder how others would write the same with that word, Yours Ian.T
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