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B a t h e D r a w n F o r g i v e n S a t e
sheen curve
the beat beast
stirs
the arched spine
rumbling in its
slick movement
vertabrate velocity
beneath moon stroked
suffusion
an almond crest brow
and smudged lash
stirring
sweep fan vernacular
knock down the night
flushing tendril fires
from the russet dreams
the pale ear
and knuckles eased
through slated night
restless in a tropics
seas
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Comments
Esker
Tue, 2013-03-05 22:17
"muses are for musing..even on nip nights in canada"
"P" <3
a mr wolfie head....
Frenchf
Tue, 2013-03-05 23:30
Unfinished work?
Not sure what the meaning of your comment is but this work is definitely unfinished.or was it meant to be so?
Esker
Tue, 2013-03-05 23:41
It can be unfinished for you dear reader
and for others it can be a beginning
..
poets..readers all have different capacitors
to their flux....What is chocolate to some
can be mussels to others
I like the use of Definitely..
and "or was it"
Is it??
Thank You!...