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If only, Shakespeare could hear
to err, tis human..
.how doth thou sayest
thou in absence
and
Thy, where dostith cometh from
another poeter’s version
Thou sleeepest
like in tempest...
As I return from a worldly sojourn
was absent for a week
none notestist dis
not even thou
none will misseth us at all
that I doth vow!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
William Saint George
Wed, 2013-09-25 11:04
Hi loved
If this is supposed to be nonesense verse, then you're spot on.
I find humour in the ridiculous conjugations, but it makes almost no sense to me.
Also, the first line is from Pope, I believe.
No verse is free for the man who wants to do a good job. - TS Eliot
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loved
Wed, 2013-09-25 13:21
SPOT
on
loved
mand
Wed, 2013-09-25 14:06
What clammer do we rise in
What clamourr do we rise in the greater scheme of things and of what worth are we? just a drop in the oceanic sea is the plight of thee and me.
Love Mandxxx
loved
Wed, 2013-09-25 21:50
clammer may be
but don't hammer me
loved
weirdelf
Sun, 2013-09-29 03:10
hammer
maybe my sense of humour is deeply flawed.
cheers,
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Ian.T
Sun, 2013-09-29 03:45
Loved
It is terrible that this whatever is going to have more comments than many poems that need them on Neo.
Told you the world is Mad, when this that sounds as if someone fixed your drink has so many writing about it.
Tell the truth was this supposed to be seriously funny or were you having a day where you thought we hadn't noticed, lol.
Take care young Bard and put more water with it.
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sun, 2013-09-29 10:25
if I recall correctly the
foundation of this one
emanated from one u had sprung
just go and see
and salvage
the ung bard
will ye
happiest be thee
loved
Ian.T
Sun, 2013-09-29 17:34
Loved Thank you
I probably instigated the problem as I do sometimes lol.
I usually ask you to write some good stuff for us as I know you are capable of doing.
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sun, 2013-09-29 19:45
the bard trustest the only friend
Brutus
till Brutus .....
proves to be one
Ian
loved