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sincere be my thanks
Thank you so much so to say
despite your busy schedule
you do find some time
to come my way …
how then from Neopoet
I can stay away
when many think of me
as you do …
some if not many
say words so few
as much as keep on going bard
work at poetry very hard
someone also asked me to join
a workshop to my mind refine
the best one of them all
loves to chastise
does make a final call
you know who that one could be
that only one after all...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Ian.T
Wed, 2013-05-22 07:09
Loved
A goodly quiet rant of thank you to the ones that comment on your work.
Why some find it hard to comment is a mystery to me..
Come on Young Bard lets see the real poet come out of his dark room and write something to gladen our hearts, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Wed, 2013-05-22 09:24
I love you Ian
for your generous heart
shall ...
emerge out of the tunnel of darkness
there is always light at the end
and
I perhaps am more than half way through
but
my real thanks Ian
go to you
loved
Ian.T
Wed, 2013-05-22 10:27
Loved Thank you
Your unconditional love is accepted.
If you walk backwards into a tunnel
you will always be aware of the light.
Loved, we (some of us) take quite a while
to become natural without fear of others.
Your pathway seems much clearer now.
We shall now learn to walk and write,
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Wed, 2013-05-22 10:34
I have always composed fearlessly
knowing some may read me
though it maybe decades later
as i see twenty years in advance
Thanks Ian
loved
Ian.T
Wed, 2013-05-22 10:40
Loved
That nasty lump of rock heading toward us and is due here during 2029 is it going to miss us lol Take care.. Where are you (What part of the world)
Take care where ever, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Wed, 2013-05-22 11:11
2029
or u mean 1029
such ones come and go
but neither i nor u will
in 2029 know
'''Where are you (What part of the world)...
I am steering on that very rock...
still alien !
till anon
loved