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and perhaps you know not still..tis digital kids
and perhaps you know not still tis digital kids
my brain is made of golden chips
that's why that alone works mostly...
hold one...
will you
and
then some one will say
a diamond one is now on ..
whose
will be news....
the chip will ask a question
is it now on ?
or
diamond slow down
better on than off ...
so digital God gave a hint
one for that
and
zero we can't say
we all know not
hence one and a dot
keep fixing a lot...
genetic progeny
in each slot
a vertical dash
and
then shall come a dot
bang on the given slot...
a one and a zero
in turn off and on
one at a time
else both shall be gone ..
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Free verse
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Comments
Frenchf
Fri, 2013-03-22 18:58
Your chip
Or Betty buffs chip. What vision are you trying to create?
loved
Fri, 2013-03-22 19:03
search me in the
woods
the computer chip
like each one of us ...
including you ..
as you say
''''we shall only walk by
once this way...''''
Khalil Gibran
did that say...
loved
Ian.T
Fri, 2013-03-22 20:09
Loved
We are now ruled by the one and a nothing, how sad that our world is without all the other things that make it so beautiful, I wonder what any God would think, knowing that we are but a Zero and a One caught within our sight for as long as we crawl the Earth plain,
Yours Ian.T (With a sadness that creeps to overtake us) also lol.
PS:- Things are not that serious are they, La La..
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Fri, 2013-03-22 21:00
first time
not understood Ian
loved
Ian.T
Sat, 2013-03-23 04:00
Loved
The computer rules us it is a beast that uses just a One or a Nought,
It would be great if we could give it the old world morals and mannerisms,
but with the family structure going is there any hope.. Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sat, 2013-03-23 08:10
hope less
disappointment will be least
and you will not be listless
nor rest=less
tc
dear me Ian
loved