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remember O! till then
I would have commented
but as I have just returned
from a cremation
my eyes are still wet.
The man was blessed
But now his woman is dead…
But grief can't be over come
in a day or two,
life will take its toll
so will time too
then after a week or so
the sun will return hopefully
with forebodings anew
to restore the wisdom
of the two who lived
as they were together
more than seldom
then when the sun shines
nice and bright
they will see her in the sky
like a sparkling light
they will then say well done
for coming in our life
coming and going
are God's unique ways
soon one will be a star
along, that’s gospel true
remember all till then
dear missed one
will you!
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Free verse
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Comments
Rula
Tue, 2012-10-23 11:43
Well said
Loved. Very wise words and true too. Thanks for sharing
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Geremia
Tue, 2012-10-23 11:50
I agree with Rula. And this
I agree with Rula. And this has a sweet "music" that we see in your words and hear in the easy flow of a song.
loved
Tue, 2012-10-23 12:13
grateful
and graceful
let music flow
the end
no one doth know.
loved
loved
Tue, 2012-10-23 12:14
you Rula are
so wise and kind
thank uuuuuuu
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