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The Valedictorian
She was a sooner-cum-loudly,
the top of her class,
genuine guttural groans
when I'd smack on that ass
and like any boy scout
I was always prepared
when she wanted it done
no level was spared
I'd slow down the roll
like the rest of us should
so I wouldn't let go
till she was all good
... and with a sigh of relief
flipped my hat in the air
I graduated with honor
at the college of Claire.
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Comments
temidayo
Mon, 2012-05-14 14:40
ha! so you got merit
hmmm! the wordings are nice , very well hid, if i had a clean mind i would think you had a memorable grad day. but now, i still wonder about the last paragraph. well writ.
themoonman
Wed, 2012-05-16 08:23
temidayo ...
Hello, nice to meet you sir
If we had clean minds our moments
would become less than dazzling.
What were you wondering about the last
stanza?
thank you for reading, commenting and
making me think
Richard
scribbler
Mon, 2012-05-14 22:46
Hi Richard
Hope the tuition was not too high to becum a valedickedorian lol......................stan
themoonman
Wed, 2012-05-16 08:26
lol ...
Ya know ya can't play without payin
judyanne
Tue, 2012-05-15 12:15
lol richard
this is so good - i love it
great alliteration and word usage in 'genuine guttural groans'
and rotflmao at 'She was a sooner-cum-louldly' -- but typo here :)
oh poor claire - you shouldn't've named her you cad --- lol
- nice alliteration here too with 'the college of claire'
love judy
xxxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
themoonman
Wed, 2012-05-16 08:30
Judy,
Claire would love it !!!
didn't even notice the typo ... jeeez, old eyes ya know
Thanks Judy
Kailashana2
Tue, 2012-05-15 16:57
You sure it wasn't from the
You sure it wasn't from the college of St. Claire? And did you marry her? Make her an undergraduate?
~you bad boy you, kissin-'an'-a-tellin'!
~A
themoonman
Wed, 2012-05-16 08:32
lol
I can't tell everything, what would I say tomorrow !!!
lovely to see ya Anna