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Blessings for Canada
Bless Canada where
I dwelt in self ordained confinement
and
woke up each morn,
to the sun,
trying to peek in
through the venetian blinds.
I felt like playing mischief,
closed my eyes,
till the sun was up
in the heavens,
only for a brief moment,
Suddenly,
snow captured the sight of Canadians,
I rested still wanting to bask,
in the winter sun alas,
But the Almighty my desire did kill.
It helped me through
two years and a half,
to compose over 3500 poems,
the score seeds
beyond poetic destiny,
now over seven thousand
Crack my head...
My critiques in disbelief,
as most consider me
an orphan of poetry ,
age not withstanding,
as none know me
the millions of sunrises
I had since seen
eons passed
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
weirdelf
Thu, 2012-02-23 07:03
Your score is improving rapidly
soon you will have a book of a 100 poems. I'm sure of it.
cheers,
Jess
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loved
Mon, 2012-02-27 00:01
Should you consider so
the book shall be released by you
and
less costs
I shall share the booty,
if any,
with you.
But you alone have to specify and edit
those 100
you say would do.
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loved
Mon, 2012-02-27 00:04
Should you consider so
Should you consider so
the book shall be released by you
loved
loved
Wed, 2012-04-11 13:54
this one
friend Esker ...
on CANADA
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