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Free Verse Poet
Great, I’m free
As is all my free verse poetry
Not many read me
As I speak in riddles
but that doesn't irk me,
as free I am
as a soaring bird ought to be,
Out above the horizon
Where humanity is not limited...
I soar beyond all oceans and time
I bother not about meter or rhyme
if none read me it isn't a crime.
for Loved is creativity
hence that name of mine.
Seek not any recognition
the best will come out of you
and
so I will let you read my poetry
comment only if you do.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sat, 2012-03-03 12:19
Dear Loved,
Good poem. I have a suggestion:
In this line: "if none read me ’tis isn't a crime" i think this line should be: (if none read me it isn't a crime.) or (if none read me 'tis not a crime) because the contraction of 'tis is of "it is"
I like these lines:
As I speak in riddles
but that doesn't irk me,
as free I am
as a soaring bird ought to be,
Out above the horizon
Where humanity is not limited...
always, Cat
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And reply in kind, thanks.
loved
Sat, 2012-03-03 12:52
thanks for the keen observation
i too was a bit doubtful
but my laps top
kingraid stuff
had okayed it
(if none read me it isn't a crime. ok
loved
Willy
Sun, 2012-03-04 21:06
expressions of freedom always
expressions of freedom always carry with them, if not an overt, an under current of arrogance. I think you dealt with your refusal to be constrained by certain conventions while not being offensive. Good piece
Always Willy
wesley snow
Sun, 2012-03-04 21:20
Cat caught the mistake I would have mentioned.
This is rather cute and I think you're wrong... you are read. wesley
W. H. Snow
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loved
Sun, 2012-03-04 21:27
Hello Istan
That you have read
and do read
i know
but its been a long time
since you came by
Why????
I'd wish to know...
Thanks ere I annoy you
and
you go
loved
wesley snow
Mon, 2012-03-05 12:21
I have only been busy.
The time to read you (and others) can be made. I simply must better organize. wesley
W. H. Snow
A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley
Learn how, teach others.
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loved
Tue, 2012-03-06 00:48
thanks
more later
they steal my mind and lap top
for better occupation
C R E A T I V I T Y
loved