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Naive Or Unassuming!
Reversioned poetry
Naïve or Unassuming!
A great deal
For your everlasting and solid support
As always,
albeit I impose positivity
In all human beings
I at times portray a default
though it may just be
An act of lack of wisdom
And
As they always said
Naivety meaning stupidity
but I learned as time lapsed
ere I really collapsed
I became unassuming
Slightly a shade better
Than being gloomy
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loved
Tue, 2010-11-23 20:45
Revisited poetry NAIVE ME!
Naïve idiot means Unassuming!
Thanks
A great deal
For your everlasting and solid support
As always
Albeit
I impose positivity
In all human beings
I at times I do portray a default
Though it may just be
An act of lack of wisdom
I thought
And
As they always said
Naivety
Really meaning
Stupidity
But I learned
As time lapsed
Ere
I really collapsed
I became unassuming
Slightly a shade better
Than being a subject
Only worth consuming!
Blasphemy crafted irony!
loved
loved
Tue, 2010-11-23 20:47
naive revisited
Naïve idiot means Unassuming!
Thanks
A great deal
For your everlasting and solid support
As always
Albeit
I impose positivity
In all human beings
I at times I do portray a default
Though it may just be
An act of lack of wisdom
I thought
And
As they always said
Naivety
Really meaning
Stupidity
But I learned
As time lapsed
Ere
I really collapsed
I became unassuming
Slightly a shade better
Than being a subject
Only worth consuming!
Blasphemy crafted irony!
loved
scribbler
Tue, 2010-11-23 21:23
naive
There are many who would prefer being overlooked rather than risking ridicule for their opinions. You stated this very well in your poem......scribbler
loved
Tue, 2010-11-23 22:35
i always
am glad to read ur views
thannks
loved
mand
Wed, 2010-11-24 03:08
Hello Loved
It is a fine line we tread. We become more proficient at it with age.
Love Mand xxxxxxxxxxxxx
loved
Wed, 2010-11-24 13:01
hello Mand
thanks,
mine,
you command!
loved