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Revelations in my Tuesday lecture
Perhaps there is no such thing as soulmates
And fate doesn't exist
Maybe we are simply people who get along
Two individuals that enjoy each others company
Perhaps life would be wasted waiting for the perfect one
Maybe you just have to pick someone and start living
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I'm experimenting with poems that don't rhyme. I don't really know what I'm doing.
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neopoet
Tue, 2024-08-20 13:01
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
This poem explores the concept of soulmates and fate in a thought-provoking way. The use of uncertainty and questioning in the lines creates a sense of introspection and contemplation. The contrast between the idea of soulmates and the practicality of choosing someone to start living with is effectively highlighted. Consider further developing the imagery or adding more vivid descriptions to enhance the emotional impact of the poem. Additionally, you may want to explore different poetic devices such as metaphors or similes to deepen the layers of meaning in your work.
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Leslie
Tue, 2024-08-20 08:37
Avelina
This is good sound advice! I loved it. If you don't mind leave a comment on mine.
Today never knows what tommorow will bring!
Candlewitch
Tue, 2024-08-20 08:39
Hello Avelina,
good work...keep on experimenting, it can only make your poetry better. It is very nice to meet you, welcome to Neopoet!
*hugs, Cat
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Obadiah Grey
Wed, 2024-08-21 14:53
Hey, I'm with you on the
Hey, I'm with you on the revelations !!
The phrase "Bobbing for apples" springs to mind,
(pssst, no-one really knows what the fuck is going on!)
nice start,,,,,, Obi.
Lavender
Wed, 2024-08-21 22:18
Revelations In My Tuesday Lecture
Hello, Avelina,
Yes! "Perhaps" to all the mentioned revelations! I can't help but wonder what the topic of the Tuesday lecture was, and it doesn't really matter, but I found myself sitting there, too.
Thank you!
Lavender
Avelina
Thu, 2024-08-22 03:37
Thanks <3
Haha it was a math lecture, no wonder I found myself daydreaming!
Thanks,
Avelina
author commentLeslie
Fri, 2024-08-23 18:07
Avelina
I COULDN'T AGREE MORE WITH YOU REVELATION. I DON'T BELIEVE IN SOULMATES. HOWEVER I THINK THAT YOUR APPROACH TO WRITING POETRY IS A GOOD ONE AND I LIKE THIS POEM
Today never knows what tommorow will bring!
Leslie
Fri, 2024-08-23 18:07
Avelina
I COULDN'T AGREE MORE WITH YOU REVELATION. I DON'T BELIEVE IN SOULMATES. HOWEVER I THINK THAT YOUR APPROACH TO WRITING POETRY IS A GOOD ONE AND I LIKE THIS POEM
Today never knows what tommorow will bring!