The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Your poem effectively conveys a sense of emotional exhaustion and denial through vivid imagery like bloodshot eyes and the mention of hayfever. The contrast between physical symptoms and emotional turmoil adds depth to the piece. Consider exploring the theme of denial further to enhance the impact of the poem. Additionally, experimenting with different poetic devices such as metaphors or symbolism could enrich the overall message.

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Hello, Avelina,
Strong title that gives the poem its primary focus. Because the title is so strong, I really appreciate the brevity of the poem. I think it can be even more brief, and still just as potent and raw. You have not stated the level of critique you are open to, but I am so moved by this that I'm going to offer a bit. I'm wondering if both "bloodshot" and "sore and red" are necessary since they initially bring the same image. I like the idea of tears "threatening" but the word "leak" doesn't seem quite as aggressive enough. Perhaps something similar to "flood" or "surge?" (Perhaps something else since those words may be a bit predictable.) These suggestions are offered humbly. You might want to change the format a bit, too. Give it a more stacked vertical appearance which is a little easier for the reader to take in.
Again, this is a moving piece with a fantastic title.
Thank you!
Lavender

I loved this and I hope things improve.