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Endless Moments in the Waiting Room
In the sterile room,
Fleeting whispers dance,
Silence speaks volumes,
As minutes stretch, prance.
"Will time ever mend,
The clock's ceaseless cry?"
Frustration takes hold,
Time drips with a sigh.
Longing for solace,
Amidst restless minds,
Patience wears thin,
Anxious heart unwinds.
Style / type:
Free verse
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Not Explicit Content
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Mon, 2023-09-18 21:52
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