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My Choice
You are nothing more than a choice.
My choice.
We liked each other and you wanted more
Though it made my heart sore I couldn't ignore
Those calls and pleas surrendered me
Into making that choice.
A year later and I still dread that choice,
And I wish I had never listened to your voice,
Calling me and forcing me
Into making that choice.
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Last few words:
This is about my boyfriend of 1 year, and I do have some regrets. I love him, but it gets difficult.
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Not Explicit Content
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Rula
Sat, 2023-02-11 03:37
Hello Sahar
I like it when people use poetry as a therapy or to get some bad feelings out.
I thought this is really raw and lucid.
I am sure you're going to have the right direction. You're still young but you have a brave heart.
Keep it up.
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Sahar
Sat, 2023-02-11 21:53
Thank you so much !!
Thank you so much !!
author commentSahar
Sat, 2023-02-11 21:53
Thank you :))
Thank you :))
author commentRosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2023-02-12 13:49
Write your heart
You’ll be able to process your emotions much better. It forces us to look back on our thoughts and see what is working and what isn’t. Words said cannot be taken back. Words on a page can be augmented.
Nice job
Tim
Sahar
Sun, 2023-02-12 21:47
Thank you, Tim :)
Thank you, Tim :)
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