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I Said I'd Come..The Response
I Said I Would
I said I would come along
Sorry twas a bit late
The snow was the main cause
Was so heavy a snow fall
The paths screwed
I wish I’d shown you the view
But don’t worry,
I’d said I’d come along
Have I kept you waiting for long?
The weather is cold,
Breezy still,
In the air there is a mighty chill
I’d told you to wait for me
And
Together we were to warm!
See I’ve braved the weather
The storm
Next time I shant keep you
Waiting this nasty way
As you had to today
Happy, I kept my word
Twas our first date
But better late
Than never
as they say
Come along smile once again
Even though I’m a wee bit
OK, OK,
a bit too late
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
loved
Fri, 2010-12-17 09:40
THANKS
AT times when i go out
in the snow over here
i feel much warmer
than
when i am in side here
so i will amend it to we
as u say
obviously
please do read
someone wrote a poem on LOVED
which one?
loved
weirdelf
Fri, 2015-01-02 14:59
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cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Sat, 2015-01-03 19:04
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