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How shitty another ditty (Serious Limericks)
I see that you all have a hate of me
My sorrows drag and won’t let me free
Here is safe within
I will swig another gin
Lest the terror of my hate is all you see
"Time for bed" said Zebadee, boyng, boyng..
Yours Sparrow, well it is late, night, night.
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
Just for fun, Love you all !!!
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Comments
Ian.T
Fri, 2014-11-07 10:16
I slurrrr
Damn them English Blue berries lol,
Yours Ian x
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Ian.T
Fri, 2014-11-07 18:48
Gemma
The other Pic was a while back and has worn out as we do when years pass by lol , Thanks for your approval, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
lovedly
Fri, 2014-11-07 18:51
Do you mean to say
this is your latest edition?
But you r looking reasonably young
youth of old age
tis this one!