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As Age Catches Up!

Submitted by loved on Mon, 2010-11-08 09:20

As We Age!

As age catches up,

I am now getting a feeling

We must write shorter poems

I won't say crisp,

Lest it once again causes,
A slip

And
In the minds of the elite

It gives them a chance
To lisp

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Free verse
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loved

Tue, 2010-11-09 08:56

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incidentally
i wrote one unknowingly

THE RELIGIOSITY OF RELIGION

ITS TOTALLY DIFFERENT
ur comments
my only isolated friend
over this neopoets new band

lets go hand in hand
loved

loved

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loved

Thu, 2011-02-03 21:57

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AGE HAS CAUGHT UP

As age catches up,

I am now getting a feeling

We must write shorter poems

I won't say crisp,

Lest it once again causes,
A slip

And
In the minds of the elite

It gives them a chance
To lisp

loved

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scribbler

Thu, 2011-02-03 22:05

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I guess I need to write an epic so when age catches up and shortens my poems they won't all be Haiku lol...........scribbler

loved

Thu, 2011-02-03 22:44

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HAIKUED
AND where have u been
not seen
no comments
missed uuuuu
hope u
had a good holiday
toooooooooooooo

loved

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