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Kartage
burned burden wheel
this toil under the blister sun
exposure always meted permanance
this shower shedding periphery ray
remember the golden moments
whose smiles worth bought freedom
from the wrath of wraiths
cyclonic tunnel syndrome
hurling hurts like sycthes runs
and when winter comes
and dreams awake from their
cool keep
I shall be patient
tolerant for their plaintive
enquiries into my denizen
collaborations
There is a faded photograph
pressed between passages
of favourite paragraphs
you fit there like the slim
light of dusk
the earth leaning
the stars meaning
set in patterned charm
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Comments
Kailashana2
Wed, 2011-07-13 16:48
your poetry has gained a new
your poetry has gained a new dimension, Steven. a little awkward in places, but that's your charm, eh?
~A
CCfire
Thu, 2011-07-14 00:00
That last stanza is a poem on
That last stanza is a poem on it's own and it's purity is divine :)
Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche
Esker
Thu, 2011-07-14 13:20
written loosely
so many mood shifts this active mind
fervant with race run ideals
so cheered that this went so well with
readers of poetic merit
thank you this had made my day!