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Karisma

Submitted by Esker on Thu, 2011-07-14 22:14

dressed in holly glimmer
you move
when you shimmer

now this random moon calls
my howl love
I fill this need
and sweet wind lavishs
the poplar singer leaves

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Kailashana2

Fri, 2011-07-15 10:19

read it the way steven intended, Ian...

now this random moon calls
my howl,
"love"

you know he rarely uses punctuation...

Love your titles spellings.... never thought to improvise.

another indomitable Esker poem!

~A

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