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The Fog
There are times
still
when the fog
rolls in
and you can't see
for sheer
density
You forget
for a moment
that the light
doesn't dwell
somewhere outside
but breathes
from deep
within you
but that is ok
Being lost
in the fog
brings it's own
beauty
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sun, 2012-03-18 15:28
Hello.
You forget
for a moment
that the light
doesn't dwell
somewhere outside
but breathes
from deep
within you
WOW!!!
always, Cat
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faerybeki
Sun, 2012-03-18 17:58
Hello :)
Hello :)
it's ok to forget.. and wonderful to remember, love to you Cat xxx
'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)
Esker
Mon, 2012-03-19 08:12
dead reckoning
what intuition spoke of
guiding
overwhelmned till the site
becomes the vision
bright and soft
fulfilling focus
memories sometimes tricky
like a compass spinning
we rely on gifts
this lost momentum
like flying in a cloud
faerybeki
Mon, 2012-03-19 18:15
More reliant than ever on
More reliant than ever on gifts, from all directions, such as this comment is :)) Thank you xxx
'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)
Cloudthings
Mon, 2012-03-19 23:08
Home, my darling sister...
Home, my darling sister... straight to the heart.
xx
Cheers
Anni
My dear friend always told me "Water the seeds of joy first"
faerybeki
Sat, 2012-03-24 08:55
:)) mmmm your heart, sister,
:)) mmmm your heart, sister, what a beautiful place to be xxx
'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)