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Krystal

Submitted by Esker on Fri, 2011-07-08 13:20

walking barefoot
the blue glint
shinning of her
sunwashed eyes

the shadow of the crow
slipping brief across
her brow her perfect
cheekbones

summerbrown
alone in her vermillion
sunset thoughts

a single sandwich
wrapped in wax paper
slung from her fist
in a clear Wonderbread
bag

in the dark windbreak
a single cricket sang

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

lou

Sat, 2011-07-09 04:16

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This poem is so emotive, I can feel the warmth radiating from it.

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

magics02

Sat, 2011-07-09 09:03

Just excellent work Esker. I really envisioned this whole write and I think you did an excellent job once again in portraying your vision and thoughts through words

Great!

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