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Too Dumb For A Title
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chatterbox jiber jabber yak attack clackin' clatter
this can happen on paper too
it does all the time
I know
I do
as the verbal vandal, striking again,
I ramble and amble to
no logical end
practice and practice
that's what they say
and I could be named
..."Motor Mouth of the Page"
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
lou
Mon, 2010-11-22 00:45
I like it
I like it, especially the line the verbal vandal, striking again.
Louise
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
weirdelf
Fri, 2015-01-02 01:43
nah
give it a title
cheers,
Jess
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