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ERRANT RUSE
sunlight
tumbling
rainbow drops
the clock stays still
and a shadow of a bird
trims across my thoughts
funny how this purpose
drifts me
ive been
though these before
felt the letters stirring
in thin sheaves
like wind
in the grasses
there are ruins
filled with sleeping
shadows
gates articulated
in dreams
and I feel your voice
on my shoulder
this sun is hot
and full soothing
touch
lingers
I feel so close
and so far away
drawn to you
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Comments
CCfire
Wed, 2011-06-08 01:42
I love it when a poet can
I love it when a poet can draw an emotion from a reader, it's what I strive to do and you successfully are able to as well, this is wonderful and those last lines...beautiful
Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche
CCfire
Wed, 2011-06-08 01:42
I love it when a poet can
I love it when a poet can draw an emotion from a reader, it's what I strive to do and you successfully are able to as well, this is wonderful and those last lines...beautiful
Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche