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Blank
Go Blank
Why?
Emotion?
Expectations?
I love being alive but it’s so hard
But why should it be hard
It shouldn’t be its just life
Live it
I don’t understand myself
Or anyone else I’m alone
But free of myself
I should love myself
But I’m hard to love
It’s okay
I love you anyway
Or I should love you anyway
Ahahha
Pian is just a feeling, emotion, in your head, nothing to hold significance
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Last few words:
Im drunk
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Not Explicit Content
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neopoet
Thu, 2023-11-16 15:42
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RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-11-17 07:26
This has
The foundation of a good poem. With some restructuring, I think it could really reach out to readers. Going blank is something I think we have all experienced. Good job
~RoseBlack~