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barely there
like a ribbon washed free of its ink
the silk empty
the words pressed by machine
my voice going
nothing left but a dawn
with a faint moon
Sleep
what is this??
for I am wicked
and cannot rest
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magics02
Sun, 2011-03-13 00:45
Moon Sleep
Esker hello to you and I so relate to a sleepless nite as I see the vision in this write
nothing left but a dawn
with a faint moon
sleepless nites.. waiting for eyes to faintly close to slumber
Nice
Regards
Mona
Roscoe Lane
Sun, 2011-03-13 06:40
Sleep,
Sleep comes easy to the innocent, those with a clear conscience. I can see the dawn you speak of, i've had plenty mornings like that. Nice poem, Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.