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Hello International Guy
Hello International Guy
Sometimes when you are not
On poetic stream,
I somehow miss you,
You should send a message,
As it gives me life,
To try and write poetry like you do.
But then you are abstract,
What can I do?
Except await a word
Of praise from you
Hope you are doing
What I’ve told you to
And
The result you would share
With me would you?
Style / type:
Free verse
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Geezer
Tue, 2011-02-22 12:04
The stream...
of conciousness here, written in the wind, over international borders, makes me think of loving without reservation. When one does that, they are truly a part of the universal brother/sisterhood. You have delved into the soul of humanity, and shall be rewarded. ~ Love ya, ~ Gee
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loved
Tue, 2011-02-22 12:27
Your words have earned me,not my day today but a life time as u
Your words have earned me, not my day today but a life time as you
Say
Yours is a life time gift today,
I am the initiator of the brotherhood of mankind ,
A world citizen of my own kind
Yes of some mind.
Love knows no barriers
Of land and seas
Of religion or caste
Of the wideness apart
All are the gifts of divine
Some know it many don't,
But love is that which can cement alone,
Two human souls irrespective of caste
Colour or creed or sex,
Love is universal as you know,
It plays about in many hearts,
If I may say so
But now I say many don't really know,
From where to where love does flow
And as I revert to my usual wont,
I now say all over again
I 'm just a passer by,
Like you
Anyway I accept it as time passes me away
Its upto you to accept it I pray,
For I shall pass by away
Anyway, any day after today
loved
author commentweirdelf
Tue, 2011-02-22 14:33
I love that you have written something outside your normal
I hope you get the response you want.
cheers,
Jess
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loved
Tue, 2011-02-22 15:07
thank u
jess 4 ur kindness
chered
loved
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author commentcrypticbard
Wed, 2011-02-23 21:34
deep within
each individual is a global entity that contributes to our social consciousness
and imbibes as well as partakes of each others personal experiences
only some of us are more aware of this fact than others and live accordingly.
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'write on! let these words free.'
loved
Wed, 2011-02-23 21:44
that was for
uuuuuuuuuuumy dear friend
loved
author commentcrypticbard
Thu, 2011-02-24 22:58
Word will come
When word there is to share
the result will be forthcoming
when coming is possible
in times so terrible as this
the last success that was gained
from underneath being straddled
how quaint that was opposite
to what's now being prescribed
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'write on! let these words free.'
loved
Fri, 2011-02-25 14:13
Beautiful,is your underlined message
i do understand
keep at it
the result
Can't be slated off hand.
Patience does it
its only hope
we all depend upon
life long
loved
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